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Saturday, 3 March 2012

The most difficult task for this time.. :)

  • You are an education officer attached to the Ministry of Education. You have been asked to write a short article on literacy in selected countries. Your article should use the information given below. You should write 150 to 200 words.

Literacy Rate: Bangladesh and Pakistan Lag Behind
by: Najwa Latif

The literacy rate between male and female for year 1990 and 2000 increased steadily for many country generally. However, there was still a great disparity in literacy rate between some countries.

For poor country like Bangladesh, Kuwait and Pakistan, there were slow and imbalance increase of literacy rate between 1990 and 2000 for both male and female with percentage growth was within 10%. Broadly speaking, although female's literacy rate in these countries had risen within the range of 10% over ten years, they still cannot exceed male's rate. Despite this substantial increase, the disparity in literacy rate for developed country such as Brazil, China and Kuwait compared to poor country is still very wide. They also showed a balanced increase of about 10% for both gender throughout the decade. Somehow, in 2000, literacy rate for most of these countries was more than 70% for both gender and this made a difference within range of 20% between poor country's literacy rate. Mostly, the ratio for literate persons in developed countries against those in the poor countries was 3:1.

In conclusion, a large gap between developed and poor countries in terms of literacy rate still extant although all of them showed an increasing trend among in year 2000.

(200 words)


~WARM~ said...

Your article is very great. You use past tense to interpret data. It is a correct way to make an article. Besides, you also included the author and the title. Good job!!

zati abby mirul said...

thanks warm...

bigbrother&kids=) said...

good one! never had the slightest idea to think of developed vs poor countries, and good vocab range, and a little grammatical mistakes to be taken care of, unlike before.

"within THE range of 10%..."
"to poor country IS still very wide."
"a balanceD increase OF about 10% for both gender throughout THE decade."

btw, great blog you have here!

zati abby mirul said...

thanks amp for your very good comments.:)